Thursday, March 26, 2020
funny teeth story
Hi, my name is Lexie and for my writing, It is inspired by a little film called teeth. Here is a link to watch the video https://www.literacyshed.com/teeth.html you can watch the video and then read my story and comper the two and you can leave your opinion in the comments.
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Hi Lexi, I enjoyed reading your story, it made me laugh! Great job on your introduction and inserting the link for others to watch.
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Miss Roberts
Hi Lexi, fantastic writing! I liked the way you explained what type of fish they caught. Keep up the great work!
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ReplyDeleteI loved how funny your story was to read. You described the scene so well that I could imagine being in the boat too, ka pai!
Hey,Lexie, I really liked your story, I watched the video to they were both so funny good job on the Introduction with the link, The start of the story was also really catchy great job, this sort of reminded me of my poppa but my poppa has teeth. Maybe next time you could add a capital letter for your title page. But other than that it was greatš.
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